2/1/2015
pg. 204
The protagonist (main character) in my story is named Uthred, the son of Uthred who is son of Uthred and the descendant of Uthred before him. He is tall, blond, strong and very honest. Uthred is also clever and brave. The antagonist is fate because he always thinks something will happen perfectly, then everything falls apart.
Maybe you should have added a little more text explaining deeper about the antagonist and a little more about the protagonist, but overall a good job.
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