Crossing the wire!

WILL HOBBS
pg. 75.

The main conflict of my story is that Victor (the protagonist) has had some family problems like his dad has died in a very sad way. So Victor is like the "Man of the house" so he decides since its going to  become winter and his family cant farm anymore, victor decides that he will go and get a job, as his father used to do. Victors father died because of his job. So now victor would send the money he earns to his family. Like his father would do. First of all, i think that Victors family would get enough money to live in El Norte. Then they would be happy. But one more thing, is that Victors best friend left the country a few days before Victor left. ( He left with his mothers permission). Now the parents of Victors best friend are looking for him. Right now in the book. He is in LOAD of trouble.

Bye! See you next time!

HN