Thursday, November 5, 2015

Super Diaper Baby
By Tony 6B
English

Main Characters
Baby: A newborn baby fall out of the window and drink super power juice and have super power.
Deputy: A bad guy and always want to kill the baby also he have a pet dog.

Minor Characters
Parents: baby’s parents.
Policeman:Try to catch Deputy.
Deputy’s  dog: He saved baby.

Setting
One day two kid was messing around and teacher let them write a story so they write the story called “Super Diaper Baby”.

Events that cause the Rising Action
First there is a new born baby, the baby drink the super power juice and a bad gai try to kill him.

Climax or High Point
The time that the monster throw Baby in a vocation and pat dog save Baby.

Rate the story (1-10) and give a reason for the rating
I rate this story 8 out of 10 because it have some bad world in it but it is story is very funny.

Interesting Language
What’re ya gonna to? (111)
Me like juice box. (109)

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